It's not looking bad at all, though it took a while to bash it into a proper two-page spread. For the most part, I've just been distracted away from this project with other IRL matters for the last several days and haven't been able to sit down and work on it. I seem to have gotten some momentum back, though. Onto the remaining sub-levels (B through D) of dungeon level 1!
Next up: sub-level 1B, the "Beastly Foray," a series of crudely-hewn chambers inhabited by semi-cohesive bands of shadowspawn (or what other games would call goblinoids) that, depending on how campaign events unfold in the overworld, may or may not pose a serious and organized threat to adventurers. The challenge for level 1B is going to be accounting for these varying possibilities: the 'spawn may act like wild beasts, or like a disciplined army, depending on whether the overworld is haunted by Forces of Chaos or not.
Here's hoping that bit of complication manages to fit on two facing pages as well!